Can you help me edit my essay?Doctor Faustus is a tragic play by christopher Marlow. In Doctor Faustus Marlow depict the nature of human, unsatisfoctory thal led him to choose the black art. There is similarities and differences between Faustus and Lucifer. The similarities is the deviation from the straight way.Faustus choose to learn magic to satisfy his ambition although he know it’s forbidden.Lucifer the head of the devil encourages Faustus to to continue on the devil path. Another similarities both Faustus and Lucifer doesn’t worship Allah.And they are dammed in hell.Faustus dammed for choosing magic and Lucifer dammed before Faustus damnation. The differences between Faustus and Lucifer are Faustus is human. He is faulty but not bad as the devil Lucifer. He could have become a good person when the good angle appear and encourages Faustus to repent.Unfortunately Lucifer encourages Faustus to steer clear from repentance and follow the devil path. Moreover he warned him many time he will cut him in pieces If he pronounce the christ’s name. Another differences which is Faustus is human and have the ability to choose between the good and evil path.Whereas Lucifer is devil. He had thrown from heaven and can’t change his path. 

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Regarding the editing, I think that some details might need to be included and a few clarifications. Lucifer is mentioned, but be sure not to confuse Lucifer/Satan with Mephistopheles, the devil who assists Faustus. Then, the key to Faustus's fall lies in his very human quality of pride, which is what often is said to have led to Lucifer's fall: in not being the best or highest of all beings, Lucifer decided to oppose God, thus making himself the lowest of all beings. Faustus has that same story line. He wants to be the best, and in seeking that, he chooses to become the worst and most tragic of men.

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In Christopher Marlowe's Doctor Faustus, we find a man we should consider among the very best of humans. At the outset of the play, Faustus is a middle-class scholar, aided by his family and his schools, who has mastered what the mind and society can provide. The play begins showing him considering what his next course of study should be, and he decides deems the usual pathways (logic, medicine, and law) as being beneath his intelligence. He has already cured towns of the plague and finds that the law deals only in tangible or base things. [You could select a quotation here that illustrates this.] His pride will not allow him to devote himself to anything but the highest uses.

When he next considers divinity or religion as his course of study, he reads tragically and selectively—randomly finding in passages of the Bible words that suggest humans are already likely to be damned and cannot of their own power prevent eternal punishment. [This could also be supported with a quotation.] If Marlowe was, as is commonly suspected, a Catholic or an atheist, this harsh Protestant doctrine would be false. Faustus, however, takes it at face value, without reading further and finding in subsequent passages lines that support a more merciful God.

Like Lucifer, Faustus's pride leads to his fall. Also like Lucifer, Faustus rejects eventual presence with God. Mephistopheles, Lucifer's ambassador to Faustus, even reminds him that to cut oneself off from Heaven is to make oneself one's Hell:

Why, this is hell, nor am I out of it.
Think'st thou that I, who saw the face of God
And tasted the eternal joys of heaven,
Am not tormented with ten thousand hells
In being deprived of everlasting bliss?

Nonetheless, Faustus turns toward necromancy, which he thinks will elevate him beyond what devotion to God and religion might offer. Once he sells his soul, Faustus becomes increasingly less dignified and is less able to achieve anything of value to himself or others. His great accomplishments seem to be playing a practical joke on the Pope and conning a poor man in a deal over a horse. Like Lucifer, whose name means Bright Star, Faustus falls from his position of intellectual and social dignity to that of a pathetic man tormented by his inability to repent.

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