Are the anti-bullying strategies used by schools successful? i need a thesis statementi need a thesis statement

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Kristen Lentz | Middle School Teacher | (Level 1) Educator Emeritus

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A strong thesis statement contains two parts:  and assertion of about your topic and supporting subpoints.  You could take your topic in two different directions.  One is write in favor of anti-bullying strategies and create corresponding subpoints for your body paragraphs that support your opinion. 

For example:  Anti-bullying strategies positively impact student behavior on school campuses by creating student awareness of the causes and effects of bullying as well as providing interventions for at-risk students.

Or you could write against anti-bullying strategies and their ineffectiveness.  Your subpoints could address why the anti-bullying strategies do not work.