I am ESL and i writing a paragraph on the holocaust. Please list me an introduction and conclusion.donot say you should write on ....

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lynnebh eNotes educator| Certified Educator

We are not helping you if we write your paragraph for you because then you will not learn how to do it yourself. So we can give you some ideas but YOU have to write it yourself..........sorry..........I know this is not what you may want to hear.

Since you are an ESL student, do not try to write something too complicated. An interesting aspect to writing about the Holocaust is that although the Jews were the primary target of the Nazis, Hitler also tried to eliminate other groups of people. Your thesis could be a simple one:

During the Holocaust, the Nazis sent other groups of people to the gas chambers in addition to six million Jews. Gypsies, disabled people, Poles and Russians were  considered to be racially inferior and therefore not fit to live. The Nazis also persecuted Communists, Socialists, Jehovah’s Witnesses and homosexuals.

Next, give some specific information about this -- perhaps the numbers of people that were killed among these groups. You can look this up online. Your conclusion should focus on the horror and madness of the Holocaust.