Is my revised thesis adequately stated to address relevant concers, which is listed below?Akannan: I am not sure I fully understood your feedback in a previous question regarding my thesis. Belowis...
Is my revised thesis adequately stated to address relevant concers, which is listed below?
Akannan: I am not sure I fully understood your feedback in a previous question regarding my thesis. Belowis my revised thesis. Have I adequately addressed your concerns?
Revised Thesis: Buddhists and Hindus discipline the body through abstinence, yoga and mediation as a means to achieve happiness and serentiy.
I understand the complexity and the confusion. I think a couple of things need to be addressed. I like the reworded thesis. I think that it might be more along the lines of where Hinduism and Buddhism might be. I am not even sure your original thesis was wrong. Yet, I simply wanted to make the argument that the notion of Nirvana is not one where an individual can directly "strive" for it. Such a directed end is not what the Buddhists seek and not what the master sought. When he focused on being "enlightened," I think that he realized that one cannot directly seek something or aspire to such a condition. Rather, one must simply be and understand that the elevation of consciousness is a condition rooted in process and not product. In this light, I think that my original point was that the idea of "trying to achieve Nirvana" is not something that a Buddhist can strive towards. It is a condition that happens through process, not a directed end. It was a subtle point, but one that I thought needed to be made. The reworded thesis is much more understanding towards this end.