Hills Like White Elephants Analysis

Style and Technique (Comprehensive Guide to Short Stories, Critical Edition)

The impassive, documentary style of “Hills Like White Elephants” is typical of much of Hemingway’s fiction. It manifests the care, restraint, intensity, and control, the economy and precision that characterize his best prose. The author seems to be indifferent both to the characters and to the reader; he pretends to be merely an objective observer content to report without comment the words and actions of these two people. He has virtually no access to their thoughts and does not even interpret the emotional quality of their words or movements by using adverbs; he simply records. Hemingway believed in a precise, naturalistic rendering of the surface; he insisted on presenting things truly.

As was indicated earlier, Hemingway’s ironic technique plays an important role in this story. The very use of a clear and economical style to reveal a relationship that is troubled and complex is ironic. The story seems to be void of artifice and emotion yet is carefully fashioned and powerfully felt. The dispassionate style appears to be absolutely appropriate to the cold, sophisticated, literal-minded, modern sensibility of the protagonist, yet in fact the man is revealed to be disingenuous and destructive. The deeper levels of this story are disclosed by examining not only what is implied through the irony but also what is indicated by symbolism and repetition.

The symbolism has already been remarked, and only one other observation seems necessary here. It is important to note that anything that can be said to operate symbolically does so without violating the realism of the story in any way. Hemingway uses banal repetition quite effectively here. The insincerity of the man is apparent in his dependence on empty phrases: “it’s perfectly simple”; “if you don’t want to you don’t have to.” Both the man’s duplicity and the girl’s perceptiveness, anger, and despair are evident in the way in which she echoes his transparent lies: “And afterward they were all so happy . . . I don’t care about me. . . . Yes, you know it’s perfectly simple.”

In terms of style and technique, “Hills Like White Elephants” is a quintessential early Hemingway story. The use of the language of speech as the basis for the story, the insistence on presentation rather than commentary, the condensation, and the intensity are all basic elements of his theory of fiction.

Hills Like White Elephants Historical Context

Europe Between the Wars
Hemingway wrote ‘‘Hills Like White Elephants’’ in 1926 while living in Paris. Europe...

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Hills Like White Elephants Literary Style

Setting
In ‘‘Hills Like White Elephants’’ the setting serves both to locate the story in space and time and to...

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Hills Like White Elephants Compare and Contrast

  • 1920s: Post-war American economy roars, fueled by a growing stock market. Credit is easy, and fortunes are made and...

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Hills Like White Elephants Topics for Further Study

  • Read The Sun Also Rises and the other stories in Men Without Women. How do you characterize...

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Hills Like White Elephants Media Adaptations

  • “Hills Like White Elephants” is one of three short stories filmed as a cable television movie. The other two stories on the film...

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Hills Like White Elephants What Do I Read Next?

  • The Sun Also Rises (1926) is a semi-autobiographical account of Hemingway’s post-World War I...

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Hills Like White Elephants Bibliography and Further Reading

Sources
Connolly, Cyril. A review of Men Without Women. In New Statesman, November 26, 1927, p....

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Hills Like White Elephants Bibliography (Comprehensive Guide to Short Stories, Critical Edition)

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