The Poem

(Critical Guide to Poetry for Students)

“The Ash” is a lyric poem in eleven stanzas of four lines each. It is written in controlled free verse, with two to four stresses per line. The title refers to a tree—the mountain ash—which becomes a central symbol in the poem (and in the sequence with which it was published). As well as designating flowering nature, however, the name of the tree inevitably carries with it connotations of decay and death.

The poem opens with direct quotation—the complaining voice of the poet’s sick friend, whom he is visiting in the hospital. The poem is composed of two interwoven voices, but it is not an actual dialogue. The friend’s voice is present tense, immediate. Until the final stanza, the poet’s response is past tense, reflective. He is narrating this encounter as if after the fact. The reader never learns what, if anything, he said in response to the ill man’s bitterness. Instead, in traditional lyric fashion, the reader overhears the poet’s thoughts. In the second stanza, the poet relates how a nurse gave the ill friend “lithium and thorazine”—medication used to fight depression. The third stanza gives a vivid picture of the friend in the hospital bed. Once again, the reader hears the friend’s voice, which runs into the fourth stanza, denouncing the doctors, hospital, and staff.

Repelled, the poet closes his eyes and thinks of “my mountain ash,” the tree of the title, which is now (in May) “in white bloom.” The...

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The Ash Forms and Devices

(Critical Guide to Poetry for Students)

“The Ash” depends for its effect on sharp, sensuous imagery that allows the reader to see the contrasting pictures of the sick friend—“eyes glazed,/ but fists clenched”—and the mountain ash, “in white bloom.” There are many images that appeal vividly to the other senses as well: smell, sound, touch, and taste. The sound of the bees is reproduced through the device of onomatopoeia: “humming their hymns of blue flame” actually sounds like bees swarming. This is not an especially “musical” poem in the traditional sense of identifiable rhythmic patterns, but there is a strong controlling voice—the poet’s—which occupies the center of the poem with a single grammatical unit running through seven complete stanzas. This long sentence is richly alive with the sounds of the natural world, the “music” of Nature’s bloom and decay.

Juxtaposition is the main structuring technique. The probably dying man contrasts with the tree’s springtime blooming. The poet’s complex voice is opposed to his friend’s flat declarations of antipathy, expressed in a diction and syntax as simple as a child’s. The poet’s intense reverie is set against the ill man’s half-conscious state; the shrunken perspective of the hospital room, its “sick-room odors” and “twisted smiles,” is balanced by the larger world outside.

The poem works to create the remembered ash as its central symbol, one that somehow combines life and death, flowering and decay, and thereby offers solace to the poet confronted by his friend’s illness and negativity. The repeated final image of the circle echoes the description of the ash as “my oval” and seems to symbolize some larger connection to all things in nature, perhaps the hope of another life beyond the body’s decay—one that will never end.