The Lesson Group
Can someone please critique my intro and thesis statement?
Created by melissa1o1 on Oct 8, 2009 in the The Lesson Group.
New Topics
In reply to #1: Hello, Melissa. Here are my rewrite suggestions: Sentence #1. It's a bit...
Posted by bullgatortail on Oct 8, 2009 in the The Lesson Group.
I think the first sentence is okay up to "the US" but then I'd say "between African Americans and...
Posted by pohnpei397 on Oct 8, 2009 in the The Lesson Group.
The days events have left Sylvia angry and confused. Although a part of her feels the way that...
Posted by sullymonster on Mar 2, 2008 in the The Lesson Group.
New Posts
Join eNotes
Over 3,500 study guides, question and answer forums, literature criticism, reference content, and much more!
Group Pros:
 | sagetrieb |
 | dwcsoup22 |
 | sullymonster |
 | melissa1o1 |
 | bmadnick |
 | janeyb |
 | brendawm |
 | cnuzzolo |
| parkerlee |
 | poetliane |
