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What is a thesis and how do you write one?Why is this not a thesis yet: "How the...

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shelties24me | Student, College Freshman | (Level 2) eNoter

Posted October 23, 2012 at 7:43 PM via web

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What is a thesis and how do you write one?

Why is this not a thesis yet: "How the influence of tv advertising on gender identity affects how someone should act and dress"? 

I'm writing a cause/effect paper for my comp. class and I don't understand how this isn't a thesis yet and what needs to be done. Please help!

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wordprof | College Teacher | (Level 3) Senior Educator

Posted October 23, 2012 at 9:42 PM (Answer #1)

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You are close to a thesis statement, in that the area of inquiry is indicated:  the relationship between advertising and acceptable gender behavior.  But a thesis is a body of evidence supporting a point of view or a side of an argument.  What your thesis statement lacks is a claim—a statement or point of view to be defended with research, close reading or (in your case) close analysis of the details of advertising rhetoric, both visual and sociological.  Find a specific instance where you feel an advertising campaign tries to sway gender behavior—high-heel shoes affecting the feminine walking protocols, or masculine bar behavior (such as picking up girls) affected by an alcohol product, etc.  These are just specific examples of how you must concentrate your inquiry by dealing with one or a few examples, so that your thesis can read something like this:  “As young people begin to learn the social behavior expected and accepted as normal for their gender, the clues, signals, models, etc. are often offered by advertisers' rhetorical "pitches", as much as or more than peer behavior, parental guidance, etc., as demonstrated in the following examples.”  This thesis statement can then be supported by the textual details of your research, in the body of your composition.

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