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alexb0274 | (Level 1) Honors

Posted October 29, 2012 at 4:36 AM via web

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What language techniques should I use in my diary entry for Death of a Salesman?

I'm writing a diary entry for Biff Loman before and after the discovery of his father's affair in Boston. I'm struggling for relevant language techniques to boost my grade. What are some techniques I could use with examples?


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accessteacher | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Distinguished Educator

Posted October 29, 2012 at 6:17 AM (Answer #1)

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The place I would start would be to examine very carefully what the text tells us about how Biff thought about his father both before and after his discovery of the Woman and his father's infidelity. This was, of course, the big breaking point for Biff in his life as after this he gives up all intentions of retaking Math and going to college, and instead spends his days itinerantly wandering from farm to farm, working and feeling dissatisfied with his life. The various flashbacks that the text presents us with before this time show Biff following his father around like something of a god, hanging on his every word and desperate for his approval. A few metaphors and similes might be a great idea to capture that relationship, and I have just used two in the previous sentence that you could pick out: "like a god," "hanging on his every word."

As for Biff after the discovery, you might want to take a specific concrete section of the play and use that to base your diary entry around. Note what Bernard says to Willy in Act II about Biff when he came back from Boston:

And he came back after that month and took his sneakers--remember those sneakers with "University of Virginia" printed on them? He was so proud of those, wore them every day. And he took them down in the cellar, and burned them up in the furnace.

The sneakers are clearly a symbol of Biff's hopes to go to college, and therefore his burning of them at this stage is symbolic too of the loss of that dream. Your diary entry could explore this particular incident, describing how he burnt them and his feelings as he watches his sneakers--and his dreams--go up in smoke. Pointing out the symbolism in this way would be another great technique to use that shows your teacher you have picked up on some of the literary techniques in the text. Good luck!


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uttamkumari | Student, Undergraduate | (Level 1) eNoter

Posted October 29, 2012 at 5:19 AM (Answer #2)

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Try to  write  your  diary  entry  in  a  a  sombre  and  solemn mood  because  here  you  are  dealing with  grief  and  sorrow . Try to  be  emotional and  poetic  in  mood  for  example  you  can  begin  like  -  Many  years have  gone  and  now  he  is  old  enough ....  but  age  is  not  the  question  ,  what  matters  is  his  mentality  .... . Feel  yourself  as  Biff  Loman  truly  and  personally  for  a  moment and  pen  down  your  thoughts otherwise true  emotions won't appear  in your  writing if  you  want your writing to  be  emotional . 

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