Regarding the short story Thank You, M'am, Roger and Mrs. Jones meet 10 years later. Write their conversation.
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Roger: Oh my god you're Mrs. Jones! It’s been so long to see you, how are you and how are your life?
Mrs. Jones: oh roger my dear I’m fine, it’s been so long to see you too. I’m an old woman now without job or anything to do just still at my house.
Roger: oh M’am, do you remember that day when I tried to snatch your purse? By the way I’m sorry again about that.
Mrs. Jones: oh yeah, I just remember that day! it’s ok my dear.
Roger: that day… is just change my whole life and I learned a lot from that day!
Mrs. Jones: I’m really happy that you learned these things and I depend to treat you that way to learn you the right from wrong and you got it.
Roger: thank you M’am about everything and I really appreciate you and I will never forget you and the way you treated me!
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Roger: "Oh my God! You're Mrs. Jones! It's been so long since I've seen you. How are you, and how is your life?"
Mrs. Jones: "Oh, Roger, my dear! I'm fine. It's been so long since I've seen you, too. I'm an old woman now without a job or anything to do, but I'm still at my home."
Roger: "Oh, M'am, do you remember that day when I tried to snatch your purse? By the way, I'm sorry again about that."
Mrs. Jones: Oh, yeah. I remember that day. It's OK, my dear."
Roger: "That day... it just changed my whole life, and I learned a lot from you that day."
Mrs. Jones: "I'm really happy that you learned these things, and I treated you that way so you would learn right from wrong, and you got it."
Roger: "Thank you, M'am, and I appreciate you, and I will never forget you and the way you treated me!"
Roger:"Oh my God! You're Mrs.Jones! It's been so long since I have seen you. How are you and how is your life? "
Mrs.Jones:"Oh,Roger ! Is this is really you! I can't believe my eyes! It been so long since I've seen you, too. I'm an old woman now without a job or anything to do, but I'm still at my empty home. All I have is the good memories"
Roger:"Yeah, but you still remember me that means you still have that image of me trying to snatch your purse! So I also made you remember this one bad memory! I'm so sorry!"
Mrs.Jones:"Oh! Don't be sorry my dear. Back then you were a kid, and no one was there for you! No one teached you right from wrong . So I don't blame you at all, also I'm sure that you've learned your lesson and that's what really matters!"
Roger:"Thanks you, m'am ! I promise you that I'm going to be a kind generous person like you! "
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