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gabrielle1518 | eNotes Newbie

Posted June 23, 2013 at 2:10 AM via web

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I need ideas for a thesis statement for my topic: challenges homeless students face that influence their attention span and how teachers can help.

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speamerfam | College Teacher | (Level 2) Senior Educator

Posted June 23, 2013 at 2:07 PM (Answer #1)

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A thesis statement is simply the main idea you want focus on in your essay, along with the points you will develop to support or explain your main idea.  In other words, a thesis statement is like an outline of the essay, acting as a preview for the reader. 

Your assigned topic is a sort of two-part thesis right now, the first part being that homeless students have attention span difficulties and the second being that teachers can do something to help them.  So, you have the beginnings of a thesis statement, and what you will need to do is decide what kinds of points will support these.  Your research should suggest to you the points that you will want to develop. 

A few possibilities come to mind.  I have never done any formal research in this area, but I have had homeless students.  Students who are homeless often have short attention spans because they are hungry, exhausted, and disorganized.  So, these are points that can be developed for the first part of your thesis. 

What teachers can do to help students overcome their difficulties, the second part of your thesis, is try to tailor their teaching in a way that addresses each of these difficulties, in other words, to create accommodations for each student.  Again, I have only my own experiences to draw upon as I think about this problem, which is truly a tragedy. 

Putting all of this together, here is a thesis statement I might have if I were assigned to this topic:

Homeless students suffer from shorter attention spans because they are often hungry, tired, and disorganized, and it is up to teachers to address each of these problems through accommodations, such as arranging for students to eat breakfast at school, helping students schedule some "down" time during the school day, for example, sleeping in study hall, and providing space in the classroom for students to store their books and papers. 

Of course, ultimately, the problem of student homelessness is a social problem that the teacher alone does not have the resources to attack, so any teacher with homeless students should be trying to line up resources to help the family solve the basic problem of homelessness. 

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