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I need a good attention grabber for my introductory paragraph. My Thesis is Captivity...

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diamond56 | Student, Grade 10 | eNotes Newbie

Posted December 19, 2011 at 6:47 AM via web

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I need a good attention grabber for my introductory paragraph. My Thesis is Captivity always causes damage, as it affects us physically, and as it affects us emotionally.

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amerie | College Teacher | (Level 2) Adjunct Educator

Posted December 19, 2011 at 11:24 AM (Answer #1)

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"All punishment is mischief; all punishment in itself is evil." -Jeremy Bentham





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