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Funny Misplaced or Dangling Modifiers

Do you have any favorites? Here are two of mine. I love the mental images.

Flying over the African landscape, the elephant herd looked magnificent.

Covered with hot melted cheese, we ate the pizza.

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Smashed beyond repair, Bert saw his watch lying on the court.

The hunter crouched behind a tree waiting for a bear to come along with a bow and arrow.

We saved the scraps of meat for the dog that had been left on our plates.

 

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Smashed beyond repair, Bert saw his watch lying on the court.

The hunter crouched behind a tree waiting for a bear to come along with a bow and arrow.

We saved the scraps of meat for the dog that had been left on our plates.

 

All good, but if this were a contest, I would have to vote for #3! REALLY good!

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Dangling in the water, the fish watched our toes as if they were food.

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Hanging on the wall, my mom really liked the picture.

Baking in the oven, John waited for the pizza.

The woman walked the dog in purple suede cowboy boots.

Covered in mustard and relish, I enjoyed the hot dog. 

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Smashed beyond repair, Bert saw his watch lying on the court.

The hunter crouched behind a tree waiting for a bear to come along with a bow and arrow.

We saved the scraps of meat for the dog that had been left on our plates.

 

I love this post!! Can't you just see a bear tiptoeing through the woods with its bow and arrow?!

This is not a dangler, but I discovered one of my favorite troublesome modifiers on a clock shop sign: Used grandfathers for sale--cheap!

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The biggest, best, and baddest list of dangling and misplaced modifiers:

http://www.educationoasis.com/curriculum/LP/LA/dangling_modifier.htm

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1) Forgetting to do homework, the papers received 0s.

2) Tired after studying, the drink tasted refreshing.

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This isn’t exactly a dangling modifier, but it is certainly a lesson in how one should be careful to use precise language to avoid any embarrassing faux paus:  January 20, 2009-We will be back after these commercial messages with more information on whose holding the presidential balls.

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One of my favorites and one of my first expriences with misplaced modifiers is the sentence, "Last night I shot an elephant in my pajamas." It just creates such an amusing visual. Other examples would be, "Rolling down the hill, Bob saw the rocks approach the highway," or, "I saw my grandmother's dog wearing my bathing suit." Then again, that last one could, sadly, actually happen.

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