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Can I change the letters of the poem: "I head a fluy buzz when I died" without changing...

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maistar03 | Student, College Freshman | eNotes Newbie

Posted December 8, 2009 at 9:40 PM via web

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Can I change the letters of the poem: "I head a fluy buzz when I died" without changing its meaning. I have to change every single letter. HELP

For homework I have to change the letters of the poem but the meaning but stay the same.  The instructions say that I can alter the order of the words by making grammatical sentences to clarify the meaning.

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ask996 | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Senior Educator

Posted December 9, 2009 at 3:58 AM (Answer #1)

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I'm not sure if this is what you wanted, but it's a good shot: The sound of an insect was loud at the time she passed All was tranquil around her bedside And the atmosphere was tranquil too despite the waves of thunder and lightening All those gathered had been emptied of tears Heavy sighs abounded strongly as they awaited a final moment as God would be visible to those assembled She gave her momentoes to others The little bits that were hers given away when all of a sudden an insect caused disruption its azure erratic blundering Intervening amidst illumination and herself suddenly eyes gave out, and

she was unable to view that she had viewed.

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