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Build up a tragic story on the fallowing lines: It appeared that my aunt has seen a...

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bijlee | Student, Undergraduate | (Level 1) eNoter

Posted August 31, 2013 at 4:32 AM via web

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Build up a tragic story on the fallowing lines:

It appeared that my aunt has seen a man pushing a women down from the balcony of a 8th floor flat across the street and she was shocked because the man had also seen her watching him commit the crime. In result she has been attacked.When I reached to my aunt's house, what I saw there was shocking beyond words-------------------.

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tjbrewer | Elementary School Teacher | (Level 2) Associate Educator

Posted August 31, 2013 at 3:37 PM (Answer #1)

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The police were already there, and had taped off the area.  Despite crime scene tape, I could see the blood streaks on the porch, and in the front hall. 

Police slowly wheeled a stretcher with a body out of the house towards the coroner's van. 

"You acquainted with the owner of this house?" a police officer asked me. 

"Yes," I replied, apprehension growing. 

"We'd like to ask if you can identify the body." 

The officer escorted me to the stretcher, and the coroner unzipped the body bag far enough for me to see the face. 

My Aunt's face stared back at me. 

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