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i was wondering if you could help me? i am having particular trouble with the thesis statement and i am not sure how to order my essay. if you could help me with my thesis statement and a rough essay plan i would be very gratefull. i have only read up to act two scene six, therefore i can only write up to this particular part of the play and this is what is making it more difficult for. thankyou Posted by rachel-magee on Oct 7, 2008. |
Antony and Cleopatra Group
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A possible thesis statement: Marc Antony's ultimate demise was due to fundamental flaws in his character. Although a warrior soldier he lacked disapline and the political savy to sustain his hold on empire, he simply did not have the 'brains' that Octavian had......... I think this might be a good start for you. You should research Julius Caesar, Antony and Octavian that way you will get a feel for Antony's character flaws compared with Caesar's and Octavian's extraordinary leadership abilities. I hope this helps you, and try to finish the play for it is the only way you will really understand what you write. Good Luck! Posted by dbello on Oct 9, 2008. |

